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Oh man, I know that there are lots of problems with this piece, but I decided to submit it anyway. It's been a while, and for the most part, I have a lot of half-finished pieces sitting on my desk that I could submit but haven't yet.

I tried varying line weight to give depth to the piece, which didn't really work because I sketch too roughly. Advice?

Either way, enjoy!

Edit: I fixed the shading under her body and on the chair legs. Is it better now?

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:iconsupersonichero:
Lucky chair... :D

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Me: Y'know Danny, since Danielle was cloned from your DNA, that means that she's techinally your daughter and not your cousin.
Danny: What?! I'M THE FATHER OF A 12-YEAR-OLD HALF-GHOST GIRL! *runs off*
Me: Huh... I always thought she was 10 years old...
:icondapoopsmith:
you could indicate more of a shadow of the chair on her body...it took me a while to realize what the position was.

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-a thing of beauty is a joy forever-
:iconinflator:
you say it's halfway done, but I think it's fantastic as it is! I think the lines, or the sketchiness quality, work perfectly!
:iconjackal24:
In need of a bigger chair!

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"Sure" is one of the most common answer’s you'll get from me...yup...
:iconinvizking:
Wow, that is heavenly amazing. The stress creases her chest is putting on her top looks phenomenal, and painstaking to accomplish in art form. The way her arms are curved on the chair look very real, and you left no detail undrawn - including the bits of thigh poking out from the chair. Your art never disappoints!

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"For the world is divided, experience teaches, into two parts: things to be murdered, and things that would hinder the murder of things."
:iconumbroboy:
Incredible! The level of detail is actually quite amazing :)
:iconmar-x:
After looking at this I have got to thinking. Could you do the overflow seating picture in your new style? Please?

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You see this pouch. Yeah the brown one around my waist. Well I got an M80 in here with your name on it.
:iconregbill:
Their is nothing wrong with this drawing!! :D
:iconpuppypump101:
Very well Done! OwO
I'm sorry, I must be blind to the detail that's missing in this piece, cuz I cant see the problem here...

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Be Creative, Be Herd & Be You!
Stay Mellow.
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:iconoupelay:
That's just perfect as is! I'm just amazed with all the details here and there: the cellulite on the legs, the folds in the shirt. Really, great job!

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June 10, 2008
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